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    Re: Happening

    I like this Sergio, it's an interesting scene. I'd consider a more widescreen crop and I would also try cropping so that the foreground sign is cropped out - you'd lose a couple of interesting characters but it would de clutter the left side.

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    Very nice Sergio, remove the bottom line to the white continuous line, this will have more impact as people will appear bigger.

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    Re: Happening

    Nice.

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    Re: Happening

    Quote Originally Posted by bje07 View Post
    Very nice Sergio, remove the bottom line to the white continuous line, this will have more impact as people will appear bigger.
    +1.

    The sign doesn't really bother me as it is aligned with the column in the building opposite

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    Re: Happening

    Simon, Jean, John, and Greg, thanks for the comments and suggestions.

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