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    Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    Dear Friends,

    I have captured a frame and then tried to crop it to form a story living Vs non living. Kindly share your views about the crop as well as give your suggestion to make the frame better.

    Thanks - Tejal

    Original frame :

    Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcomeIMG_8854 as Smart Object-1 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

    Cropped version :

    Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcomeIMG_8854 -3 by Tejal Imagination, on Flickr

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    Re: Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    Nice capture. Color balance seems a bit off on my monitor but, that can be expected with mixed light source like that. I like both but, kind of lean towards the cropped version.

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    Re: Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    Thanks Richard . Lights, may be you are right as I have kept it as it is.
    Quote Originally Posted by rpcrowe View Post
    Nice capture. Color balance seems a bit off on my monitor but, that can be expected with mixed light source like that. I like both but, kind of lean towards the cropped version.

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    Re: Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    Nicely captured.

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    Re: Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nicely captured.
    Thanks John

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    Re: Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    Your title suits the image very well, nice photo

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    Re: Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Your title suits the image very well, nice photo
    Thanks Binnur !!

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    Re: Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    I like the concept of the second image more than the first, because the first one is too busy and does not have a clear focus.

    What I don't like is the muddy colours from the mixed lighting. I don't really like the brownish area on the left and the heavy door on the right either. If it were my image, I'd be more likely to come up with something along these lines.


    Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome


    Still not perfect, but fluorescent lights tend to give of lighting that is not particularly attractive. I tried to get the yellow / green out to some extent and give the image a crisp and cooler tone, with the focus on the model.

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    Re: Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    I like the concept of the second image more than the first, because the first one is too busy and does not have a clear focus.

    What I don't like is the muddy colours from the mixed lighting. I don't really like the brownish area on the left and the heavy door on the right either. If it were my image, I'd be more likely to come up with something along these lines.


    Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome


    Still not perfect, but fluorescent lights tend to give of lighting that is not particularly attractive. I tried to get the yellow / green out to some extent and give the image a crisp and cooler tone, with the focus on the model.
    Thanks Manfred . The revised version is looking quite better. I will correct the color balance.

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    Re: Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    I like Manfreds version very much !!!!!!!

    Griddi.....

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    Re: Living Vs. Non living - C & C are welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by just me View Post
    I like Manfreds version very much !!!!!!!

    Griddi.....
    Thanks Griddi

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