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    Break-up call!

    Break-up call!

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    Re: Break-up call!

    Harmon, I think you nailed this one! Her expression, pose, all works great. My one suggestion...have you considered converting it to B&W. The image is somewhat monotone as it and you lose nothing at all converting plus, the emphasis is then really her expression, which IS the image. But then, it's all about personal preference and vision.

    Edit - Oh, and maybe crop a bit off the top? All that sky really doesn't add anything to the image and by losing some of it the grey sky gives way to more of the model.

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    Re: Break-up call!

    Thanks Flashback! I will check out your suggestions.

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    Re: Break-up call!

    Nicely done.

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    Re: Break-up call!

    Very nice.......but perhaps as Jack suggested, it would also look good in B/W........

    Griddi......

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    Re: Break-up call!

    So many different scenarios could be assumed from this shot, it could work just as well if titled "The Call".

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    Re: Break-up call!

    Nice work Harmon, let's hope it's not a break up ! I think I too would crop a bit off the sky at the top.

    Dave

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