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    Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    Hi, going forward on my photography venture I stopped and clicked another shot. Can you please review it and let me know what exactly is missing for it to make it much better?

    Please provide your views and suggestion with composition, crop and processing as i really liked the contrasty petals acting as layers.

    Thank You

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    Very nice composition. It will look even more soothing if you remove the bird. Nice timing with the lighting too.

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    Very nice image Raj I agree with Haseeb about the bird.

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    Definitely remove the bird, but the composition is perfect. Really nice image Raj!

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    Re: Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    Nice leading lines and overall composition.

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    Re: Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    That subject deserves more work, different angles...perhaps laying at the base shooting up.

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    Re: Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by HaseebM View Post
    Very nice composition. It will look even more soothing if you remove the bird. Nice timing with the lighting too.
    Thanks for your valuable review and suggestion. Will remove the birdy

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    Re: Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by bnnrcn View Post
    Very nice image Raj I agree with Haseeb about the bird.
    Thanks a lot for your kind review and suggestion lol i choose the shot because of birdy, I will remove it as suggested.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rebel View Post
    Definitely remove the bird, but the composition is perfect. Really nice image Raj!
    Thank you for your kind suggestion and appreciation

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    Re: Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    Nice leading lines and overall composition.
    Thanks for your kind review and appreciation

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    Re: Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by chauncey View Post
    That subject deserves more work, different angles...perhaps laying at the base shooting up.
    Thanks for your kind review and suggestion. I do that more shots coming up with one of them laying at the base and shooting up

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    Re: Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    Nice shot, Raj. I think I have seen that building before somewhere...

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    Re: Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    Raj - the shot brings back some lovely memories of Delhi. I agree with the others about the bird and I might be tempted to see what the image looks like with a touch more shadow detail in the dark areas of the right side by burining it in a bit more there.

    That being said, it is a really lovely image taken while the lighting was just gorgeous.

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    Re: Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by FootLoose View Post
    Nice shot, Raj. I think I have seen that building before somewhere...
    Thanks for your kind review. If you saw this architect on CIC then there is a possibility that you have visited my previous threads

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    Re: Lotus Temple - C&C Welcome

    Quote Originally Posted by GrumpyDiver View Post
    Raj - the shot brings back some lovely memories of Delhi. I agree with the others about the bird and I might be tempted to see what the image looks like with a touch more shadow detail in the dark areas of the right side by burining it in a bit more there.

    That being said, it is a really lovely image taken while the lighting was just gorgeous.
    Thanks for your kind review Manfred. Hope you are enjoying in Varanasi now a days and hope you really enjoyed New Delhi

    I will surely burn the dark areas in the shadow and will remove the bird too

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