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    Storms coming

    Taken today, at a construction project in upstate, NY
    Storms coming

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    Re: Storms coming

    The clouds are great but that large expanse of frozen lake and snow in the fore and middle grounds really fights for the eye's attention.

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    Re: Storms coming

    Jack

    I addition to that sky, I think the lines, tone, light and shade, you've got on the land is excellent. I agree with Terry that the attention needs to be thrown more onto the land and the sky. I think the only way of achieving that is with a pretty hard crop. Cropping it just above that dark patch on the ice in the middle ground would take you nearly to a 2:1 aspect and almost (but not quite) put the top of the hills onto the bottom third line.

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