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    Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time

    Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time
    Canon 60d with 24-105. F8 1/200 sec 100 ISO, 28mm

    Went down to the Cherry Blossom Parade last Saturday. Captured this image after the parade. C&C welcomed and encouraged.

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    Re: Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time

    Congratulations for putting up with the crowds. I've actually gone down there at peak cherry blossom time with only a 180mm lens for the purpose of shooting candids of the people.

    You did a really nice job of framing the monument with the blossoms. However, you positioned yourself relative to the monument so it is lit very flatly. If you had found a similar composition when you could have displayed one of the sides in shade, the monument would have appeared to be three-dimensional, unlike in this image when it appears to be two-dimensional.

    Also notice the contrail at the top of the monument. I think you'll like the image better if you get rid of it.
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    Re: Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time

    Thanks Mike. Was down there early and left at 11:30 (springfield metro was PACKED when we got back) and did get some parade pics also that I may post. Started that book you recommend (light science and magic). Here is another flat lit one but just love the sky. (just a snapshot but the sky is crazy blue and the clouds are nice).

    Thanks for your comments and I enjoy your insights.

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    Re: Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time

    The second one is a much better exposure that displays the detail in the monument. You might be able to increase the exposure by about 1/3 stop without losing detail.

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    Re: Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time

    Beautiful. I so wish I had been able to go.

    There is something special about DC in the spring.

    Agree with Mike about the 2 vs 3 dimensional perspective of the monument in #1. Still a lovely image.

    Marie

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    Re: Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time

    Contrails will always be prevalent in the sunny skies. This place is a good opportunity to catch one of the contrails actually lining up to the tip of the monument...don't you think? I like the second shot.

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    Re: Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time

    Hi Izzie and Mike tyvm yes it would be a good place. Thinking about entering one in at the lical NVPPA competition may enter the second one. Will tweak the exposure when i get home tonight. Thanks again

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    Re: Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time

    Just posted the edited version above. Mike you were correct it was underexposed (1/4 according to lightroom) Thanks again.

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    Re: Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time

    If it was mine, I would try achieving the brightness and detail of the monument about halfway between the two images and I would go with the brightness of everything else as in the revised image.

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    Washington Monument at Peak Cherry Blossom time

    Hi Mike I put an adjustment over the monument and the building in front and applied an -.13 adjustment to the exposure. It does bring out more of the detail. Thanks again.

    Marie: thanks for your comments. Maybe next year you can make it down.

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