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    hide and seek

    me and my daughter were playing hide and seek in a local park just before xmas.and only just got around to tweaking it a bit.so a little sharpen,cropped and converted to b&w
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    hide and seek

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    Re: hide and seek

    Very nice...works in blk and white and it comes with a plesant story. A captured memory.

    Chuck

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    Re: hide and seek

    Hello Bootsy,
    The photo looks very nice.
    However, may be - just may be - it is needing a little bit of contrast.
    Care to try please ?

    I like the background out of focus ...

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    Re: hide and seek

    Very nice picture, Bootsy. I agree with Antonio that it could use a little bit of contrast adjustment.

    Also, if you ask me, it is a bit too centered. I would like to see a little bit more background on the right to balance out the nice brick wall and put the subject off center.

    Great shot!

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    Re: hide and seek

    I like this one--it seems really natural and innocent.

    I agree with Alis, too; I think more background to the right would increase the feeling that she's peeking around the corner, giving it a more "hide 'n' seek" kind of feel.

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    Re: hide and seek

    Alis, that is a good point

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    Re: hide and seek

    thanks for the comments i'll have go when i get chance

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