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    Acne

    Another image on the teenage troubles theme

    Acne

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    Re: Acne

    Hi Steve,

    I prefer this to the other series (I'm so easily offended )

    Good idea, well executed, as usual form you.

    In an effort to be helpful, I have studied it closely and can now see a couple of things that distract me;
    the bend in the paper bottom towards left - which could probably be cloned out, and
    there's a grey line running down the diagonal edge of the folded paper - not sure if it is real or PP induced, but I don't like it much.

    Anyway, I hope the comments are helpful.

    Cheers,

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    Champion. Very creative and deserves to be in a modern art gallery.

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    Nice take! Empathy...like it

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    Re: Acne

    Quote Originally Posted by Dave Humphries View Post
    I prefer this to the other series. Good idea, well executed, ...
    My sentiments as well. One thing that really grabbed me was the clarity in this image. The focusing and sharpening is just spot-on on that eye.

    Contains Strong Language from the Start!, for me, just didn't work as well as the idea suggested it should. This does. Just thought - Maybe it's the simplicity. Is 'Contains Strong Language...' to complex an idea?

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    Re: Acne

    Hi,
    Well done.
    Radu Dinu

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    Re: Acne

    Once again than you for your support. I have a few further ideas on this theme.

    the bend in the paper bottom towards left - which could probably be cloned out, and
    there's a grey line running down the diagonal edge of the folded paper
    Dave, both are pretty embarrassing and unforgivable on my part. The grey line (as you probably suspected) is simply poor selection in P&P. I will rework this image because I do actually like it myself which is pretty unusual for me.

    Steve

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