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22nd August 2013, 02:44 PM
22nd August 2013, 09:43 PM
I like this a LOT!
I feel as if the "V" is falling downward, mostly due to vertical striations in the background. If that's your intention, you might consider allowing more space at the bottom for the "V" to fall into.
The only thing that bothers me about the image is that I feel the background is too realistic in an otherwise modern, abstract image. I get the feeling that the background is a sky that has been turned vertically for use as a background. Altering the background to become more abstract would take this very nice image to an even higher level for me.
23rd August 2013, 12:47 AM
I echo everything that Mike said.
Any image that makes you stop and look at it for a while is a success on some level, and that certainly happened with me. Spent some time trying to figure out what the heck I'm looking at it--and I'm still not sure! But it is interesting.
23rd August 2013, 01:06 AM
23rd August 2013, 02:37 AM
Very clever. The 90 degree rotation of the image makes the post/pole in the water look far more interesting and what would have been a good photo become a great abstract image.
Well done Jordan
23rd August 2013, 06:26 AM
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