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    A Street Portrait:

    I have no idea who this lady is. The colours were interesting to me.


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    Re: A Street Portrait:

    Quote Originally Posted by AB26 View Post
    The colours were interesting to me.
    Hi Andre,

    I agree - with the exception of the sliver of green chair under her elbow - if mine I think I would crop off about 2% from the bottom edge.

    The composition works for me and the DoF makes the subject in no doubt and separated from the background.

    If I am honest, there are a couple of other minor things I would "clone or tone" to improve it, but they're difficult to explain, IF you are interested, I could do a quick edit and post so you can do an A:B comparison and see what you think?

    Hope that helps,

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    Re: A Street Portrait:

    Quote Originally Posted by Dave Humphries View Post
    If I am honest, there are a couple of other minor things I would "clone or tone" to improve it, but they're difficult to explain, IF you are interested, I could do a quick edit and post so you can do an A:B comparison and see what you think?
    Thanks Dave,
    Be my guest. You are most welcome.

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    Re: A Street Portrait:

    Quote Originally Posted by AB26 View Post
    Thanks Dave,
    Be my guest. You are most welcome.
    Just tried, but unfortunately I can't open that jpg with anything, it says the file is "incomplete" when I save it locally and attempt to open, even windows cannot display a thumbnail, although it works fine online.

    OK, I snipped it off screen and saved that

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    Re: A Street Portrait:

    Hi Andre, the concrete pillar ruins it for me.

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