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    Market salesmen

    Hey all..while i was at pilanesberg this Gentlemen was selling his wares at the local market..the place was packed!! But no one was buying..he seemed to be having a bad day.. alot on his mind..so i grabbed a quick snap..i feel the black and white added to the mood. Also the light and dark played a bit of meaning to me as he was looking in this direction..even the line of the column seems to seperate the dark and light for me. Please may i get some C+C, this is my first portrait image of b+w that i've put on here...and i really njoy it..so i look forward to hearing from you to improve in this area especially.
    THANK YOU IN ADVANCE!!

    Market salesmen

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    Re: Market salesmen

    I would crop a fraction tighter at the top, Claudio.

    But that means also losing a bit from the right side or going to a different size ratio and I am not sure if you can manage with 5 x 4 ratio. Probably depends on whether you have any spare space in the original.

    A good shot which is working well.

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    Re: Market salesmen

    Works very well Claudio. I would crop just above his head. A square crop might work.

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