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    Still life - the re-shoot:

    After some C&C on a previous attempt I had to re-shoot.

    Hope this one is better.

    Any C&C most welcome.

    Thanks for looking.

    Still life - the re-shoot:

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    Re: Still life - the re-shoot:

    Looks good enough to eat.

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    Re: Still life - the re-shoot:

    Hi Andre, i like the photograph, if i may there's 2 things i would tune.

    Personally i liked your initial background better. maybe this one could be tuned down just a tad to make it darker?

    The 2nd thing for me is how bright the banana's are, a thing the overall picture would gain by having them a bit less intense.

    Beautiful nonetheless!

    i might add, i had the picture open on my 2nd monitor for about 10minutes and the yellow kind of tuned itself down... maybe i just needed few minute with it

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    Re: Still life - the re-shoot:

    You cheated, you added variety. Nice one.

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    Re: Still life - the re-shoot:

    Quote Originally Posted by Geoff F View Post
    Looks good enough to eat.
    Thanks Geoff.

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    Re: Still life - the re-shoot:

    Quote Originally Posted by JimG View Post
    there's 2 things i would tune.
    Come on Jimmy, now I will have to do it again.

    That monitor thing, always a big issue. Spoke to the owner of a Pro lab yesterday, he recons it is the printed image that really counts.

    Thanks for the comment!

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    Re: Still life - the re-shoot:

    Quote Originally Posted by Shadowman View Post
    You cheated, you added variety. Nice one.
    Blame it on Ken Curtis, he encouraged me.

    Thanks John.

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    Re: Still life - the re-shoot:

    Looks yummy, therefore it's a success!

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    Re: Still life - the re-shoot:

    Quote Originally Posted by GrahamS View Post
    it's a success!
    Thanks Graham.

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