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20th April 2013, 10:00 PM
#1
Another attempt at Skin...
Thank you all for the info, it has helped alot...
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21st April 2013, 12:11 AM
#2
Re: Another attempt at Skin...
Is this better or is there more to see?
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21st April 2013, 11:31 AM
#3
Re: Another attempt at Skin...
She is attractive but her skin tone varies a bit.
Her right shoulder and her chest are brighter than her face and draw my eye.
Her torso is flat on to the camera separating the belly button jewelry from the top of the photos; perhaps having her hips turned a bit more to add a bit of shape to her torso would make that area more part of the design rather than just a flat area separating top from bottom.
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21st April 2013, 11:50 AM
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Re: Another attempt at Skin...
Hi Mitch,
It's coming along nicely, but to be brutal, I still have a few personal issues with it ...
1. The skin tones look a bit off to me - what did you use as a white balance reference?
2. The crop is too tight - it needs some negative space for the lady to look into
3. Obviously a very attractive lady with a great figure, but I think "less is more" in this situation.
4. Image needs a bit more sharpening.
Here's a quick mock-up to give you an idea of what I had in mind ...
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