The first image seems a little soft on the focus Kenny, and the light being a beauty dish is harder and more contrasty than a box or shoot through and personally i think it doesnt work very well on such a young subject.
I would try the modifier on an older subject in their teens to twenties and see what you get, be careful with your exposure though no 2 is a little bright maybe?
how about a nice soft box on you beautiful little girl?
Is it just me Kenny or is the color tint a little toward the magenta side in the skin tones?
Hey Kenny - congrats on the new toy!!
I would have to agree with the above. I'm no expert on beauty dishes, but from what I've seen, tried, and read about, young children don't respond very well to harsher light.
The poses are great! The focus is a little soft, and you may want to consider a grey card to help out with those skin tones, they do look a little off on my monitor too.
I really do like the composition, and crops though - nice job!
Hi Kenny,
To be honest, I think you'll probably get a better result with a shoot-through umbrella, along with a reflector to get some light up under the chin (similar to the photo below) (look at the difference in the shadow areas under the chin).
A lot of "beauty" lighting often tends to be very flat "surrounding" light. I normally only use my beauty dish as a hair light.