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    Marta ....

    Hello everyone, I'm new here. I live in Poland and I speak English medium. What do you think of my first photograph?

    Marta ....

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    Re: Marta ....

    Welcome to the forum, Jacek.

    Nice low key exposure. Make sure you post regularly, so everyone can keep 'abreast' with your images


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    Re: Marta ....

    Yes the 'main elements' of this shot fit nicely on the 1/3 composition line.

    It does work well though.

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    Re: Marta ....

    All joking aside, this is a very, very nice first attempt. To improve it, I'd like to see some separation between the background and the woman's shoulder and hat.

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    Re: Marta ....

    agreed with Mike, adding a second light source behind the subject would separate the two

    BTW, nice composition

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