Hello everyone, I'm new here. I live in Poland and I speak English medium. What do you think of my first photograph?
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7th March 2013, 05:49 PM #1New Member
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Marta ....
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7th March 2013, 05:53 PM #2
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Re: Marta ....
Welcome to the forum, Jacek.
Nice low key exposure. Make sure you post regularly, so everyone can keep 'abreast' with your images
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7th March 2013, 07:26 PM #3
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Re: Marta ....
Yes the 'main elements' of this shot fit nicely on the 1/3 composition line.
It does work well though.
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8th March 2013, 03:23 AM #4
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Re: Marta ....
All joking aside, this is a very, very nice first attempt. To improve it, I'd like to see some separation between the background and the woman's shoulder and hat.
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8th March 2013, 03:49 AM #5
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Re: Marta ....
agreed with Mike, adding a second light source behind the subject would separate the two
BTW, nice composition
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