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    Domestic 1
    Hi all .... I wonder what comments this image would draw..
    It is for me one of those typical vistas that catches my eye as I move around and about, I guess it can only be described as a still life and I allowed myself the editing freedom to explore some richer tones in the RGB..
    I think it works but I would be most grateful for feedback and views...
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    Re: Domestic 1

    I wonder, Frank, if there is a little too much on the left and too little on the right.

    Possibly, I would consider a slight crop of the right side and bottom.

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    Re: Domestic 1

    I love these kind of shots Frank...I think that tonally the dishtowel doesn't quite work but I like the idea.

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    Re: Domestic 1

    Thank you Geoff F for taking the time to comment and I can see what your suggesting, the above composition is perhaps a little awkward making the eye 'bounce' around ....

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    Re: Domestic 1

    Many thanks Daisy good of you to take the time ... and your view on the colours is very welcome ....

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