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    Re: leaf

    A lovely subtle lighting on the leaf. Two things caught my attention that migth be worthy considering.

    The tip of the elaf is outside the frame on the left-hand side. I'm sure that was a deliberate artistic decision, but I wonder if it works as well as intended? I think that the tip just inside the left-hand edge may have worked better. The other comment is that what is the lower half of the leaf as we look at it is blurred and not so well lit. Again, I appreciate that this has been a decision made in the making of the picture, but I'm not sure that it is as effective as it would have been if all of the leaf had been lit as well as the top part and all of it was in focus. But, of course, you and others may disagree with these comments.

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    Re: leaf

    Thank You for the comment Donald,

    Well, the lower part of the leaf being blurred wasn't my intention. Actually, the leaf wasn't a flat one, (I hope you can see that.I don't know how to describe the way the leaf was being held, sorry) and so I couldn't focus on both the halves.

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