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    Re: Fitness II

    A very nice sense of scale (fake?). Too bad you don't have a bit more details in the burned areas.

    I can't tell if this column is huge of small exaggerated by the focal length and that creates a nice mystery.

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    Re: Fitness II

    I really like the power of the simplicity, which in my opinion is aided by the silhouette and would have been compromised if you had included more foreground detail. However, considering the lack of interest in the foreground, I would like it better if you had cropped to eliminate most of the bottom. Doing so also would direct attention immediately to the person.

    You're getting a halo near the top of the tall vertical object. Back off on the sharpening of those edges to solve that problem.

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    Re: Fitness II

    That's a very strong shot. Might want to see how it looks with a tighter crop toward the upper left (leave out some of the right and bottom edges). I'm not sure placing the person dead center works with the visual weight of the column.

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