Results 1 to 7 of 7

Thread: Last time here...

  1. #1
    Plumcrak's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    Ft. Wayne, Indiana
    Posts
    1,546
    Real Name
    Jon

    Last time here...

    The only down side to changing jobs is that I will no longer have access to several old buildings that I enjoy shooting different features at. So in the upcoming last week of my current job I will have to try and re-visit some of these buildings for a Good-bye shot.
    Here is the old incinerator in the basement of an old grocery store.

    C&C always welcome.

    Last time here...

    Last time here...

    Last time here...

    Last time here...

  2. #2

    Join Date
    Apr 2011
    Location
    Ontario (mostly)
    Posts
    6,625
    Real Name
    Bobo

    Re: Last time here...

    From the title I thought you were leaving us.

    Gladly not the case.

    Yes shoot them to death and form a good historical record for future generations to enjoy.

    I like 2 and 1 best.

  3. #3

    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    northern Virginia suburb of Washington, DC
    Posts
    19,064

    Re: Last time here...

    I like the compositions, especially #3 perhaps because I like the use of diagonals, but the mid tones seem to be lacking contrast that I think would work very well with these photos.

  4. #4
    Plumcrak's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    Ft. Wayne, Indiana
    Posts
    1,546
    Real Name
    Jon

    Re: Last time here...

    Quote Originally Posted by Bobobird View Post
    From the title I thought you were leaving us.

    Gladly not the case.

    Yes shoot them to death and form a good historical record for future generations to enjoy.

    I like 2 and 1 best.
    Bobo, I have not been asked to leave this site, thankfully. I have no plans on leaving here...too many kind people willing to help others improve.

  5. #5
    Plumcrak's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    Ft. Wayne, Indiana
    Posts
    1,546
    Real Name
    Jon

    Re: Last time here...

    Quote Originally Posted by Mike Buckley View Post
    I like the compositions, especially #3 perhaps because I like the use of diagonals, but the mid tones seem to be lacking contrast that I think would work very well with these photos.
    Mike, thanks for the comments. #3 is my pick also so here is a slight rework. I will spend some more time on it later this evening.

    Last time here...

  6. #6

    Join Date
    May 2012
    Location
    northern Virginia suburb of Washington, DC
    Posts
    19,064

    Re: Last time here...

    Much, much nicer, Jon. Notice, however, that the top left corner is significantly brighter than the first version and detracts the eye from the subject. Whatever you did to adjust the image, try applying the adjustment to every area of the image except the top left corner.

  7. #7
    Plumcrak's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    Ft. Wayne, Indiana
    Posts
    1,546
    Real Name
    Jon

    Re: Last time here...

    I think it is a good thing that I am changing jobs...the lighting here sucks and I can never seem to get it right. Time to move on!!!

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •