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    Slightly better

    The weather that is, been fogged in for a week - but its improving Comments welcome

    Slightly better

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    Re: Slightly better

    Nice.

    Few things came to mind at first:
    increase saturation of the greens, vingetting, croping wide frame to place horizon not in the middle, yellows less radioactive.

    But I like it as it is.

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    Re: Slightly better

    Yes a slightly different crop was my first thought.

    For me, that heavy cloud at the top combined with a fairly dark foreground look a bit like a sandwich, and with plenty of mustard.

    So. I would like to crop a little off the top to remove that heavy band of cloud.

    But how to finish the crop depends on what you prefer. Possibly crop the bottom as well to create a wider effect or keep the same ratio and lose a bit from the sides.

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    Re: Slightly better

    Thanks for the feedback guys, Appreciated

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    Re: Slightly better

    Superb shot, one of your best Jeff.

    I have been staring at it for a good few minutes. Dang this shot is great.

    That top dark band is not doing much for the image imho, perhaps down about an inch but that is a minor point.

    Looks great in the lightbox btw.
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