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    Sunset

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    Re: Sunset

    Hi Renee,

    Three things strike me;
    a) the horizon isn't level
    b) there appears to the the relfection of somthing vertical you have cloned out
    c) the logo attracts my eye away from the subject

    Good composition and colours though,

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    Re: Sunset

    Quote Originally Posted by Dave Humphries View Post
    Hi Renee,

    Three things strike me;
    a) the horizon isn't level
    b) there appears to the the relfection of somthing vertical you have cloned out
    c) the logo attracts my eye away from the subject

    Good composition and colours though,
    These, and add that the composition is unbalanced to the left. I think it needs another framing device on the right. YMMV.
    And those sumptuous colors! Gotta love 'em.

    Tyler

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    Re: Sunset

    Fixed the horizon. Thanks for all of yalls comments.


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    Re: Sunset

    A pleasant scene to look at.

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