I've been having a look at some wedding photography websites and I shake my head in disbelief.
On your home page I want to see samples of your work. Nice big samples, not tiny thumbnails that I can't enlarge.
And with your samples I want to see your best work, I want to see the bride and groom and not a horse that takes centre stage.
Also I don't want a 4000 word essay on how wonderful you are as a photographer. Yes you(like everyone else) capture those special wonderful, life changing, precious, one of a kind, memories...blah blah. I want to see your work!
I want to know you by your name. I want to make a connection with you.
Then the photos
Poor choice of backgrounds
The couple so far away I need a telescope to see them
Over done Selective colouring
Bad framing of the shot
and probably more.