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    Fstop Manalo's Avatar
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    A time waiting.

    I was at our subdivision's clubhouse because I was going to play badminton with my good friend. While waiting for her, I somewhat had nothing to do so I decided to get my camera and take pictures around the clubhouse. Please comment, i'd like to know what I should do to improve more. I'd really like to learn a lot more. Thanks

    A time waiting.
    A time waiting.
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    Re: A time waiting.

    The first one is a nice image, and I think I can see what you are looking to do. There is a lot of "clutter" though, which draws my eye away from the main image: the reflections at the bottom right, the plants and their shadow on the wall. I think it is about looking in all the corners of the viewfinder, not cleaning up with PP.

    With the other two, I don't know what your aim was. I'm new on the forum as well, but I do get better feedback if I say what I was trying to achieve

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