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    a dip in the jungle

    My wife and I were trekking through the jungle and we came across this area for a much needed respite. Any comments and especially critiques would be most welcome. Still learning to see with my "eyes".

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    Re: a dip in the jungle

    Hi, Steven

    Looks like a great place to visit. I like your foreground and your placement of the falls very much. I think you could bring out the significance of the falls by cropping a moderate amount of the background foliage to about the height of the large bush just above the falls, and just a little off the lower edge of the foreground. I'd also like to see another version with the saturation and contrast slightly reduced, and a little lifting of the shadows. The stream does a great job of pulling the eye along to the falls.

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    Re: a dip in the jungle

    Kevin, thanks for the detailed pointers. Will post another version

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    Re: a dip in the jungle

    did some minor touch up as suggested

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