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    Beach

    Hi
    I was looking for good composition, using HDR technique to add more attention to tire trace, I liked the viewer follow the tire trace to the part contains clouds and trees. Do I succeed or not?

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    Re: Beach

    It partially works for me, Meisam, but I find the left side is rather confused

    I think I would try some different crops to concentrate more on the tracks. How does it look in colour?

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    Re: Beach

    Thanks for your comment, left side was the sea. my point of view seems not good in this shot I think...
    here a color one... the beach was full of trashes. In Iran unfortunately people do not respect the nature...

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    Re: Beach

    I thought the colour version would look something like that, Meisam.

    There is little tonal contrast between the sea and shore so they both become 'confused' when in monochrome.

    I suppose you could have a go at considerably changing the blue channel to darken, or lighten, the blues which would give more contrast.

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