31st July 2012, 11:26 AM
I was looking for good composition, using HDR technique to add more attention to tire trace, I liked the viewer follow the tire trace to the part contains clouds and trees. Do I succeed or not?
31st July 2012, 06:38 PM
It partially works for me, Meisam, but I find the left side is rather confused
I think I would try some different crops to concentrate more on the tracks. How does it look in colour?
31st July 2012, 08:53 PM
Thanks for your comment, left side was the sea. my point of view seems not good in this shot I think...
here a color one... the beach was full of trashes. In Iran unfortunately people do not respect the nature...
1st August 2012, 11:06 AM
I thought the colour version would look something like that, Meisam.
There is little tonal contrast between the sea and shore so they both become 'confused' when in monochrome.
I suppose you could have a go at considerably changing the blue channel to darken, or lighten, the blues which would give more contrast.