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    Some green leaves, for comment/critique.

    100_0215red.jpgDear all,

    This is just a simple subject, nothing unusual, but would like receiving your thoughts on the picture (focus, light,composition, etc). The idea was showing the green leaves and let the bike as a background. Thanks!
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    Re: Some green leaves, for comment/critique.

    Hi Otavio,
    Take the bike away and do it again. Always be aware of the background.

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    Re: Some green leaves, for comment/critique.

    More even lighting on just one branch, without odd ends from other leaves showing, and I think it could work.

    Maybe having a bike as a background is possible, but not as it is currently arranged.

    Worth a bit more experimentation though; I'm sure there is a good, although slightly unusual, photo to be had there.

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    Re: Some green leaves, for comment/critique.

    Thanks for the tips, Geoff. Will consider them!

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