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    Early morning tabloid.

    Early morning tabloid.


    Thank you very much for viewing.


    Nikon D70, Nikon 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5 lens, ISO 800, f/8 at 1/100 second.

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    Re: Early morning tabloid.

    You have such a good eye, Willie. This is just one of many images that demonstrates how you "see."

    The woman in the background is a distraction for me. I realize that she would be difficult to eliminate by cloning and that you need as much space as possible behind the subject. So, consider cropping just enough to eliminate most of her torso and clone the rest.

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    Re: Early morning tabloid.

    I'm not worried about the woman on the far right. In fact, having two people there who are disinterested in the proceedings actually adds a bit of interest for me.

    And my gaze goes from the man reading, along the seats to the woman, then I look from her to the men in uniform, and finally back to the reader.

    All the time I am noticing extra bits of fine detail.

    The only minor item which I would prefer not to be there is something just visible on the extreme left just above half way up. If it is cloneable, I would remove it. But I'm not that concerned.

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    Re: Early morning tabloid.

    Hi Jiro,
    That is a picture telling a story. You got everything just right. Well done.
    TFS

    Andre

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    Re: Early morning tabloid.

    Jiro... I love this image but, I have to agree with the comment above that cropping out the woman in the upper right background would help. Additionally, I think cropping along the top of the wooden structure at the top might be positive...

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