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    Dancer on the Sand

    I do not often take photos of people, however this young lady dancing on the sand caught my eye, the soft colours in the back ground with the deep coloured veil, with just her eyes showing just seemed right.

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    Dancer on the Sand

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    Re: Dancer on the Sand

    I think it's a great shot. The only thing is her eyes. The left one looks completely dark, while the other has a tiny speck of white. Are you somehow able to fill in some light in her eyes?

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    Re: Dancer on the Sand

    I really like the subject and the strong colors, but I think your black clipping point might be too high. Lowering it will weaken the billowing fabric and light-to-dark transitions in her hair, but should restore detail in the most critical place for portraits - the eyes.

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