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    The roasted corn vendor

    The roasted corn vendor
    Canon 550D, Tamron 17-50mm@50mm, f/4.0 for 1/320s, ISO 400.

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    Re: The roasted corn vendor

    Hi Abhi,

    I like the composition and focus/DoF with this shot.

    If mine I would;
    a) reduce the exposure by half a stop
    b) not sharpen it quite so much, the amount looks a bit over the top
    c) clone out the couple of bright white spots visible through the fence over on the right
    d) blur the sharply defined green apron(?) visible between the cobs in lower left corner

    Hope that helps,

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    Re: The roasted corn vendor

    Quote Originally Posted by Dave Humphries View Post
    Hi Abhi,

    I like the composition and focus/DoF with this shot.

    If mine I would;
    a) reduce the exposure by half a stop
    b) not sharpen it quite so much, the amount looks a bit over the top
    c) clone out the couple of bright white spots visible through the fence over on the right
    d) blur the sharply defined green apron(?) visible between the cobs in lower left corner

    Hope that helps,
    Thanks, Dave. I will try to address some of these issues. Will upload an updated version soon.
    Last edited by abhi; 27th June 2012 at 10:05 AM.

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    Re: The roasted corn vendor

    Here is an edited version:

    I have darkened the white spots as I was not able to clone them out nicely, made the vignette stronger, dodged highlights on his face, and blurred the apron. I can't do much about sharpening as this was shot in JPEG mode. Let me know what you think.

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    Re: The roasted corn vendor

    Geoff or Dave, Abhi?

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    Re: The roasted corn vendor

    Quote Originally Posted by Sahil View Post
    Geoff or Dave, Abhi?
    Oops, Thanks. Fixed it.

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