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    Little RWBB

    Yes, another female Red-Wing Blackbird.....but....but...I like the background. C&C welcome.

    Little RWBB

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    Re: Little RWBB

    As you said, very nice background and good sharp bird.

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    Re: Little RWBB

    Thanks Bobo.

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    Re: Little RWBB

    Hi Paul,

    Yes, I like the background too, but I would suggest cloning out the one/two twigs top left corner.

    Very nice viewed big,

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    Re: Little RWBB

    Hi Paul, I love the tufted grass in the background muted by soft focus. It's too bad she was not on just a single branch. The branches Dave mentioned and the on in soft focus diagonally under the tail I think takes away from what would be a great image. Difficult to clone them out because of the softened grass. Not sure what I would do...I think maybe crop it tighter which would remove the top left corner branches and then call it done.

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    Re: Little RWBB

    Thanks guys, I had thought about cloning the top left but try not to unless there is no way around it. Here ya go.

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    Re: Little RWBB

    Much better, well done Paul.

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    Re: Little RWBB

    That is stunning now

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    Re: Little RWBB

    Thank you Joe.

    Thank you Dave. I do agree it is better without those branches creeping through the corner. In the final I took out the tiny twig just up from the bottom on the left side. It is hardly noticable but it bugged me after I posted this last one.

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    Re: Little RWBB

    Another good one paul.

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    Re: Little RWBB

    Thanks Jack.

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