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    High Noon

    Hey everyone,
    Took this the other day around noon. Desaturated the sky for a more dramatic look.
    As always C&C welcome.
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    High Noon

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    Re: High Noon

    Hi Jack,

    I quite like the composition, although I think I would crop it off just at the top corner of the inside of the doorway so I lost (only) the black void inside - I dont think it adds anything particularly and just drags the eye down.

    Im not on my usual monitor at the moment so cant sensibly comment on the sky, etc.
    Did you mean "desaturated" above, i.e. less colour, because it still looks fairly blue, although possibly darkened in luminance - or that could just be this hotel lobby monitor Im on

    Hope that helps,

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    Re: High Noon

    Here's the cropped originial version. Thanks for the reply...

    High Noon

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    Re: High Noon

    i think i prefer the second, partially because of the crop, but also i find the sky a bit too dark in the first, and there seems to be some sort of artifact at the top of the tower in the first

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    Re: High Noon

    The composition is very strong, I really like it. I agree with wjh31's comments, the second one is better, especially the sky part.

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    Re: High Noon

    Thanks for the kind words...

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