Rusty shadow

[MilT0s]

I need your opinion on this one. Just experimenting.

Is it too confusing and/or uninteresting? Does the eye gets lost in the frame? How does your eyes travel across the frame?



(actually this is a bet between a friend of mine and me...)

[WJT]

Very interesting for mine, the colours are like an artist has painted a canvas, sensational. I'm not sure if you can photo shop out the shadow as this really spoils an otherwise cracker of a shot. The composition (other than the shadow) is perfect. My eye travels from the bottom right hand corner up to the top left and to the rusty old bollard.

[MilT0s]

Thank you Wayne for your thoughts.

So you find the shadow distracting. I know there are too many elements in there but I am not sure which one should be omitted. I am also concerned about the edge of another bollard just at the upper left corner which could work as an anchor point obstructing the eye from traveling after reaching that point.

[Donald]

Miltos - I find that there is a competition between the bollards at the top and the tyres at the bottom. I think these two very strong elements are too far apart to both be in the same image. My eye is jumping between the two.

[MilT0s]

Thank you Donald, that's exactly what I wanted to know that the triangle (tyres-bollards-shadow) doesn't work because of the competition you mentioned.

[WJT]

Well worth revisiting Miltos with those colours and a scene like this, I'm sure there is a lot more photo's to be taken.