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    Re: Natural Light, My Garage

    Any critiques would be appreciated::

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    Re: Natural Light, My Garage

    Mitch...

    I can see what you are tryng for but, there are a couple of things that are a bit problematic...

    The background is very busy and tends to compete with the subject...

    The clothing also competes with the subjects face for my attention...

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    Re: Natural Light, My Garage

    The face and hair on the forehead are blurry however her shirt which appears to be on the same plane is sharper. She looks to have been moving her head and the 1/30 a bit slow for it. I agree with Richard about the background. Outside may have given you a faster shutter speed and an option on a better background.

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    Re: Natural Light, My Garage

    Thank you so much, I do see ..

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    Re: Natural Light, My Garage

    Hi Mitch,

    Just to show you what others are commenting on. I've ...

    - Sharpened the image

    - De-emphasized the areas that we don't want to draw the eye to

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