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    Bits of life

    Hi there ,
    I've been digging in my archive for some pictures that I overlooked or something. Anyway I found this and I kinda personalized it to different level, usually I don't do this stuff but I like it.
    It was shot in sunset on the field with my 16-35mm 2.8 canon. Thinking about it I think it need to be cropped to the right and/or the the right drops of water should be stamped away so that eye won't wonder too much to the right.
    What do you think?

    Bits of life
    Bits of life by lukas.kuzma, on Flickr

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    Re: Bits of life

    I think the composition is just fine. The 'pairing' of the drops of water on the large leaf make, in my opinion, a strong enough subject that our attention is immediately placed on them and is not diverted away by any other part of the image.

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    Re: Bits of life

    Quote Originally Posted by Donald View Post
    I think the composition is just fine. The 'pairing' of the drops of water on the large leaf make, in my opinion, a strong enough subject that our attention is immediately placed on them and is not diverted away by any other part of the image.
    Thank you very much for your opinion

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    Re: Bits of life

    Really Great ! I like the use of shadow and contrast in this art.

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    Re: Bits of life

    Not enough interest on the right to make the eyes linger too long. Nice shot.

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    Re: Bits of life

    Don't change a thing. It's quite nice as is.

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    Re: Bits of life

    Nice. It was posted 2 years ago, though.

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