Bits of life

[lukysta]

Hi there ,
I've been digging in my archive for some pictures that I overlooked or something. Anyway I found this and I kinda personalized it to different level, usually I don't do this stuff but I like it.
It was shot in sunset on the field with my 16-35mm 2.8 canon. Thinking about it I think it need to be cropped to the right and/or the the right drops of water should be stamped away so that eye won't wonder too much to the right.
What do you think?


Bits of life by lukas.kuzma, on Flickr

[Donald]

I think the composition is just fine. The 'pairing' of the drops of water on the large leaf make, in my opinion, a strong enough subject that our attention is immediately placed on them and is not diverted away by any other part of the image.

[lukysta]

I think the composition is just fine. The 'pairing' of the drops of water on the large leaf make, in my opinion, a strong enough subject that our attention is immediately placed on them and is not diverted away by any other part of the image.

Thank you very much for your opinion

[patrickjohnson]

Really Great ! I like the use of shadow and contrast in this art.

[Shadowman]

Not enough interest on the right to make the eyes linger too long. Nice shot.

[Mike Buckley]

Don't change a thing. It's quite nice as is.

[FootLoose]

Nice. It was posted 2 years ago, though.