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    Cocktails?

    Thought I'd try and make some invites to a party for a change.
    Any thoughts appreciated.
    Cocktails?

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    Re: Cocktails?

    The red text on red is hard to read. Maybe too many elements as well. Perhaps one less glass or better still a pic of a finished cocktail?

    The text on the glass but facing away is distracting. I'd also be tempted to clone out some of the relections in both the glass and the stainless shaker lid.

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    Re: Cocktails?

    Hi Steve,

    Chris has pretty much covered it.

    It looks like you intended to put the text above the shaker, but didn't, why?

    Cheers,

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    Re: Cocktails?

    Thanks for the input guys.
    I'll have a play around with it see if I can get rid of some of the reflections you mentioned.
    Dave, I dunno what I was thinking about. Your completely right, I moved it in a moment of madness I guess.
    Cheers

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