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    First Christmas

    First Christmas for my only grandchild! I realize it's a bit busy, but didnt crop, to allow a greater sense of circumstance. Looking for C&C in composition and pp. Thanks for taking the time and any input

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    Kevin


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    Re: First Christmas

    Kevin
    I think the composition is good and the PP looks fine. I'm afraid though, what really kills it for me is that lighting across the head. I'm assuming it's the light coming through a blind of some sort.

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    Re: First Christmas

    I'd have to agree about the strips of light and I think it is made worse by the fact that they are echoed by the stripes in her dress. My eye is jumping about all over the picture instead of being drawn to that beautiful little girl.

    She's a showstopper and shouldn't have to compete.

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    Re: First Christmas

    Thanks, Donald and Sharon. Confirms my suspicions- couldnt decide if the lighting was interesting or distracting. Thanks for viewing.

    Kevin

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    Re: First Christmas

    Look forward to seeing more shots of your stunning wee model.

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