Waiting merchant...first B&W

[another Marcus]

Hi everybody,
my first B&W...this picture of a waiting merchant with thoughtful view was shot in Citta di Castello.

Open C&C is appreciated!

EXIF: 200 mm, 1/320, f/2.8, ISO 200, +1/3 ev

[speedneeder]

Hi Marcus,
For me the white part of the door on the left is a distraction. I'm not sure the blurry foreground adds to the image either? The man's expression is compelling. Perhaps a tighter crop would emphasize that better? Might benefit from a little push on exposure as well?
Thanks for posting!

[another Marcus]

Hi Brian,

thanks for your input, highly appreciated it!