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    Waiting...

    Hi everybody,

    this picture was taken this summer in Gubbio (Italy, Umbria).

    C&C highly appreciated!

    Cheers,

    Marcus

    EXIF: 200mm, 1/2500 s, f/4, ISO 400, -2/3 ev

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    Re: Waiting...

    Marcus

    The very first thing that hit me were the bright spots on the vehicles in the background. I would suggest that they definitely need to be removed. Then, I think, you have the basis for a very good image.

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    Re: Waiting...

    I also think that cropping out the very bright area over the vehicles and bringing up the brightness of the subject (but not of the whole image), perhaps by using a layer mask, might be beneficial.

    I do like the image...

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    Re: Waiting...

    Once again, Donald and Richard have already put my thoughts into words.

    If able to shoot again, I would have lowered the ISO and had a slower shutter speed. But I doubt it would make that much difference.

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    Re: Waiting...

    Hi Donald, Richard and Geoff

    thanks for your feedback, that was helpful for me - I have reduced the brightness of the background (and attached the update)...on lowering the brightness of the spots I will need to work out how to do that...but it's weekend... I'm confident to get it done

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