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    Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL

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    Re: Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL

    Robert,

    Nice image, the crop is a bit too tight on the boat and it could use a bit more contrast.

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    Re: Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL

    I think I would be tempted to have just a little more space on the top and bottom as well. Particularly as you have some good reflection there.

    And it would look a lot better if that boat was actually going in the opposite direction; into the scene. Or it was closer to the centre and going in the same direction.

    As it is, I would be tempted to crop the right edge and forget about the boat.

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    Re: Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL

    Thank you, I agree, the boat needs to go. There's no cropping, this is the full shot.

    Thanks!

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    Re: Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL

    Contrast is just fine...I'd clone the boat out rather than crop the image and...change the title.

    I was at a boat show there the day the first Gulf War started...weird, eh?
    Last edited by MiniChris; 13th October 2011 at 10:47 AM.

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    Re: Last Boat to Leave the City | Tampa FL

    Chris, really appreciate the feedback! Get's more interesting - I'm a military family; father was at Tyndall start of the war -
    Last edited by PhotoRob; 14th October 2011 at 02:28 AM.

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