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    River Tourig

    I would be most appreciative of critique and comment on this image,
    Best Wishes ... Pat.

    River Tourig

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    Re: River Tourig

    Quote Originally Posted by Ollokot View Post
    I would be most appreciative of critique and comment on this image,
    Best Wishes ... Pat.

    River Tourig
    Hi Pat

    This image gives me a sense of a relaxing day, warm but refreshing by the river. I also get a sense of movement from the ripples on the water. If it were my photo, I'd try to bring out some of the detail in the shadows and mute the brightness of the shrubs in the sunlight. But I wouldn't touch the water - it's perfect. Lucky you to stumble across this!

    R

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    Re: River Tourig

    Hi Raylee,
    Is this any better.

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    Re: River Tourig

    Quote Originally Posted by Ollokot View Post
    Hi Raylee,
    Is this any better.

    River Tourig
    That looks good Pat. Left side is great. Can you bring out any more detail in the tree on the right?

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    Re: River Tourig

    To my eyes, Pat, what you have there is a no win scene from the start.

    Too much shadow and the bright area, which draws my eyes towards it, lacks any real interest.

    My only suggestion would be to crop away most of the shadow areas and concentrate more on the river.

    Maybe something like this.

    River Tourig

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    Re: River Tourig

    Hi Geoff,
    Thank you for your reply, looking at the image again I must say that I am in agreement with you,
    thanks again, Best Wishes,Pat.

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