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    First attempt at a rose

    This is my first attempt at a rose, still get the hang of things, but i like it, any comments/critiques welcome
    First attempt at a rose
    Last edited by lufkin; 20th June 2011 at 10:55 AM.

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    Re: First attempt at a rose

    any tips on how i could improve it would be great, i like it, but i feel it could have more

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    Re: First attempt at a rose

    It's a great photo but because there is a missing petal it can take away or add to the photo depending on who's looking at it. Try taking it from a different angle. I always take mine from lots of different angels and keep my favs....

    -Jaimes age 12- Please help me on my photos two

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    Re: First attempt at a rose

    These are mine

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    Re: First attempt at a rose

    Quote Originally Posted by Jaimes View Post
    These are mine
    you saying my rose is yours? or you tried adding your own roses to this thread and didnt post pictures? because i can tell you now, that rose is in my back yard lol

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    Re: First attempt at a rose

    It didn't work sorry. I was trying to post them but it will not let me...

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    Re: First attempt at a rose

    I think I just uploaded one but it didn't turn out as good as in my camra..... thats strange.... by the way how did you put your photo up? I can't figure it out I joined on Sunday so I'm new..... I made an album though.


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    Re: First attempt at a rose

    Josh, the first thing you need for a perfect photo is a perfect subject; and as Jaimes said your rose has a missing petal. Also the one next to it is diseased with spotting.

    Getting that perfect bloom is one of the most difficult parts of the whole operation when shooting 'in the wild'. Sometimes a different camera angle can help.

    But apart from that, your exposure and focus are very good.

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