I shot this the day before. For me what was wrong with it was I had not properly lined the camera up with the end of the jetty and the end of the island behind it. I hadn't seen that that was a crucial (for me) element of the image I was trying to make. [Yes, I did flog myself for my stupidity].
So (and thankfully the light and conditions were even better at 6am the next day), I re-shot it. And got this.
What do you think?
40D, EF 70-200 f4 L IS @ 81mm. ISO100. 10s@f32